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When my friends went fishing at various lakes these last few months, sometimes they were lucky and actually caught several local varieties of fish, but at other times they just enjoyed the weather, some quiet times, and the views they had of nature.
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My friends are fishing at various lakes for a few months, sometimes they are lucky and actually catch several varieties of fish, but at other times they are just enjoying the weather, some quiet times, and the views they have of nature.
Misread the question on the first post. Here it is again.
When my friend went fishing at various lakes these last few months, sometimes he was lucky and actually caught several local varieties of fish, but at other times he just enjoyed the weather, some quiet times, and the views he had of nature.
Good try, Daryl. But you could have changed more than just the subject.
Here is one possibility:
When my friend went fishing at a lake this past month, he was lucky and actually caught a fish, but the last time he went he just enjoyed the weather, some quiet time, and the view he had of nature.
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