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Friday, September 30, 2016
*GRAMMAR QUESTION*
Correct the errors in the following sentence:
When the committee had met last week it is decided that they approved constructing of a new retiring centre for benefiting Seniors and there family’s which had been living in a surrounding area.
The solution will be posted in the next edition of the blog.
4 comments:
Daryl Schaeffer
said...
When the committee had met last week, it was decided that they approved construction of a new retirement center. This will benefit seniors and their family's, which have been living in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, it was decided that they approve the construction of a new retirement centre to benefit seniors and their families who had been living in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, they decided to approve construction of a new retirement center, thus benefiting seniors and their families, who live in the surrounding area.
4 comments:
When the committee had met last week, it was decided that they approved construction of a new retirement center. This will benefit seniors and their family's, which have been living in the surrounding area.
take two:
When the committee met last week, it was decided that they approve the construction of a new retirement centre to benefit seniors and their families who had been living in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, they decided to approve construction of a new retirement center, thus benefiting seniors and their families, who live in the surrounding area.
Good try, both of you. But I still see some errors in your answers. I will post the full solution soon!
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