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The little boy is going on an Easter Egg hunt with his older brother and sister, but if he wants to find more than just a few eggs, he needs to be quick because the other children have had a lot more practice.
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The twins are going on an Easter Egg hunt with their older brother and sister, but if they want to find more than just a few eggs, they need to be quick because the other children have had a lot more practice.
The little boys are going on a Easter Egg hunt with their older siblings, but if they want to find more than just a few eggs, they need to be quick because the other children have had a lot more practice.
I think you both missed a few changes: "hunt" and "children".
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